Another (I rule) [Archive]

Kiss

07-17-2009, 07:47 AM

I'm on a roll.

Personally, I love this one.
http://i453.photobucket.com/albums/qq259/Vaneskera/Art/bah.png

LiNuX

07-17-2009, 10:45 AM

nice job but some of the white markings you have on the outer layer seems to be too in there if you know what I'm saying. It's great placement, especially on the left - just that stuff on the right side that's bugging me, seems to take away from all the attention from the face - Lowering the opacity may help but I don't know - great job though :) Good to see you back in the graphics business.

You've had some really impressive work the past few days.

Sbamber

07-17-2009, 03:57 PM

The left side is way to dominate and captures the picture, taking away from the render (or stock?).
Right side to bland
The bottom has to much going on.
The covering of the render is bad in this one.
No flow
Bad lighting!
Work on it

Kiss

07-17-2009, 05:29 PM

And now I'm wondering who on earth that person is...

Sbamber

07-17-2009, 08:11 PM

And now I'm wondering who on earth that person is...

Me?
I'm friends with KittyCat:]

Iceskater101

07-17-2009, 10:42 PM

I like the idea
but i do agree the right side is a little bland
you have great signatures/graphics keep them up!

KittyCat72

07-18-2009, 10:44 AM

I guess I kind of see what Sbamber is saying, but personally, I think you did a really good job.