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Ilyich Valken
12-06-2010, 09:23 AM
Second one, finally got around to finishing it. http://www.gamers-forum.com/imagehosting/241234cead6e07d890.gif The usual.. tell me what you think of it and how I could fix it.

(I'm working on getting to the point where I summarize the game less.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vxAPyafXwDw&hd=1

On to the next?

W1CKEDTW1STED
12-06-2010, 01:06 PM
Not bad. Only a few things...

In the first part of the vid, you are only coming out my left speaker.

The middle you sounded fine.

The end it was hard to hear you.

Also, very monotone. You should sound excited, that's what pumps people up. It's like they say, people can hear you smile over the phone. Trust me, it worked when I used to do telesales waaaayyyyyyyyy back in the day for PC Connection.

For example, check out this (http://www.escapistmagazine.com/articles/view/editorials/reviews/8362-Review-Donkey-Kong-Country-Returns) video. She did a fantastic job

/sidenote - I bought DK. It's awesome. :D

Tofu
12-06-2010, 01:07 PM
Can't hear you at the end...speak up.

Ilyich Valken
12-06-2010, 04:34 PM
Most audio issues (as far as the microphone is concerned) is because of a change in microphone. I used one mic for some parts and a different for others for whatever reason. As for why the audio at the end is quiet, the levels are higher than the others, so I've no idea.. :S

Tofu
12-06-2010, 04:38 PM
If you're using sony vegas you can edit the audio.

jango
12-06-2010, 04:41 PM
Aye, aside from the sound issues here and there it was quite enjoyable to watch. It gave a fairly decent overview of the game .. only thing I would say is that I didn't get much of an idea of what you thought as someone playing it (beyond your scores) and it did seem to end a bit abruptly.

However .. a good effort all round tbh .. so +rep.

Ilyich Valken
12-06-2010, 04:45 PM
If you're using sony vegas you can edit the audio.

I use Premiere Pro, and did edit the audio, which is why I'm confused as to why it's like that towards the end.


Aye, aside from the sound issues here and there it was quite enjoyable to watch. It gave a fairly decent overview of the game .. only thing I would say is that I didn't get much of an idea of what you thought as someone playing it (beyond your scores) and it did seem to end a bit abruptly.

However .. a good effort all round tbh .. so +rep.

Yeah, admittedly, at that point I just wanted to get it done with.. :P Only thing I like about this review over the PvZ one was my ACTUALLY using my knowledge to match up video and audio, but overall.. yeah.

Jaykub
12-06-2010, 06:24 PM
Pretty good review ilyich, I'd give you rep if I could.