Kiss
10-26-2007, 07:40 PM
Sympathy in a book?
By LNNK
Amuel our character was an 11 year old girl with chapped lips and shiny teeth her mom was a librarian. Her father had discovered oil so he did not work much. Amuel had a sister named El. El was 14 and she worked at a burger shack and got bad grades.
Amuel woke up usual as ever, 7:30 am. She got into a pair of pants and a t-shirt, combed her hair and put on earrings she had her own bathroom and she was glad to. She gathered her homework and books for school and had a quick breakfast she took $10 $5 for lunch $5 for taxis there and back. When she got there she talked with her friends during there 10 minute free time. Then they got straight to work. They had to write a short story today her is Amuel?s
Amy woke up on Saturday and went to the park she found a puppy the puppy became her pet.
It didn?t get a good a grade. That afternoon as she got in the cab the cab driver went the wrong way! He would listen when Amuel told him he was going the wrong way in fact he looked like a robot he wasn?t moving he drove all day and the next Amuel was scared and was getting hungrier and hungrier. When the seemed to be in Virginia he stopped and push her out and went back to New York.
Amuel cried it was twilight she wouldn?t make it through the night! She walked till she collapsed on the forest floor she was starving that morning she had a left-over bag of chips but that was it. She ate and then felt ashamed she had ate all her food. She walked all day then she saw rooftops a town I am saved she thought.
if there are enough good comments i will continue
By LNNK
Amuel our character was an 11 year old girl with chapped lips and shiny teeth her mom was a librarian. Her father had discovered oil so he did not work much. Amuel had a sister named El. El was 14 and she worked at a burger shack and got bad grades.
Amuel woke up usual as ever, 7:30 am. She got into a pair of pants and a t-shirt, combed her hair and put on earrings she had her own bathroom and she was glad to. She gathered her homework and books for school and had a quick breakfast she took $10 $5 for lunch $5 for taxis there and back. When she got there she talked with her friends during there 10 minute free time. Then they got straight to work. They had to write a short story today her is Amuel?s
Amy woke up on Saturday and went to the park she found a puppy the puppy became her pet.
It didn?t get a good a grade. That afternoon as she got in the cab the cab driver went the wrong way! He would listen when Amuel told him he was going the wrong way in fact he looked like a robot he wasn?t moving he drove all day and the next Amuel was scared and was getting hungrier and hungrier. When the seemed to be in Virginia he stopped and push her out and went back to New York.
Amuel cried it was twilight she wouldn?t make it through the night! She walked till she collapsed on the forest floor she was starving that morning she had a left-over bag of chips but that was it. She ate and then felt ashamed she had ate all her food. She walked all day then she saw rooftops a town I am saved she thought.
if there are enough good comments i will continue