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Kiss
10-27-2007, 08:55 AM
rates please:

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2604/0907je1.jpg
playing with the pen
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2646/000dr2.gif

thanks

Joshuah
10-27-2007, 09:38 AM
Prehaps you should stop covering it with colours, mario with pink really sucks and the second one, colour do not go with each other, over-all 5/10 for second one 7 out of ten for first one, prehaps try covering top one with maybe dark colours!!
Like the top one XD
GoP

NDM
10-27-2007, 10:37 AM
As GoP said dont cover it with colurs ... And your brushes arent good try other brushes i would give it both an 6/10

LiNuX
10-27-2007, 11:41 AM
the first one shouldn't be there, don't just cover the renders with a picture

the second one is much better but again, too colorful lol and the text shouldn't be pink and the second mario looks pixelated and not blending it

just keep working and read some tutorials and you'll get better

those are actually better than when you first posted your work so its a start :D

wifi
10-29-2007, 10:54 AM
the second one looks better and its better than what i can do but its not that easy to look at with all the colors, keep practicing :-P