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Kiss
12-28-2007, 07:55 AM
Rates!
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9986/whirlnh0.png
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/3848/dunnouj2.jpg

KittyCat72
12-28-2007, 11:19 AM
I'll give the first one 6/10, I don't really like the render. Then I'll give the second one 8/10. You're getting pretty good.:D

Raw!
12-28-2007, 05:46 PM
Okay, the truth is now being spoken.

First of all, the colors aren't matching. The text isn't interesting, and there is no border. Try getting some more brushes. And use blending.

LiNuX
12-28-2007, 05:56 PM
first one: good effects but they don't go together, the render doesn't belong at all even if you blended it in a bit and the text shouldn't be black, don't know what it should be but not black - give it a 4/10 for now

second one: this is MUCH better but u should still lower the opacity of the mario render a bit and the bottom left side looks a bit blank and empty but otherwise this is better, good text placement as well - gets a 8/10 from me as well :D

keep up the work!