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Kiss
01-26-2008, 06:50 PM
Says i. HA!
Bright as air
You were there
When we saw that dark flare
It laughed and it screamed
Like it made us defeat
Then we saw
It had no eyes at all
Then my eye shut
When it opened a man was saying, but....
A clear voice with a horrible ting
It said Staren! How you fail to bring me the magic wing?
Try again to bring me it
So i can make darkness bit by bit
Then something warm shook me from my sleep
A warm hand on my cheek
You said, Levere?
While i felt hurt to very severe
With me lying on a hospital bed
Are you alright? You said
I blinked and saw
The nightmare had not happened after all!

Your Hand felt cold
Your hand was cold
I knew what that told
Weeping at your feet
Your eyes white from defeat
They tried to make me leave
But i knew i had a message to receive
A faint whisper foretold
That i was bold
As i see
You wish to have died with me
It said
Then i felt a rush of air by your deathbed
You rose almost like alive
All you said, was goodbye

Crumble
Lives ready to crumble
People hearing a rumble
Fires killing
Tax collectors billing
Scary men
One named Ben
Goodbye Earth
You are no longer worth

Evil men arunning
Men arunning
Sons of Cunning
being cruel dying in duel
killing for the pleasure
or the treasure
take a rest
wish you the best
death await
If so soon i will meet you at the gate

The Black Knight
The Black knight searches for me
and kills all thee who defend for me
my heart pumping
the ground thumping
shimmer the star
soon i will leave and go yet far
Goodbye forever
Goodbye we will meet again never

The scare
The scare erupted
A scream was heard
a figure merged from the dark
its was horrible, the trees almost lost there bark
black as the ink in a book
yet white as a hook
the figured floated to me and said,
Begone! your loved one is... dead

Spun Gold
You've spun gold
As i was foretold
People kill for it
Collecting every last bit
Not be vain
And give my family shame,
How do you do it?
Do you do it with a candle lit?
What material do you use
Please tell me that and some news

LiNuX
01-26-2008, 07:11 PM
nice work :D keep it up, before you know it, you'll be able to publish your own book with poems like the other poets lol :D

OR you can turn that into rap and become a rapper lol - i say that cuz they have some nice and smart rhymes

Kiss
01-26-2008, 07:17 PM
heh, maybe on another forum the poetry master says she loves my stuff -jumps around screaming-

LiNuX
01-26-2008, 07:29 PM
who or what is the poetry master by the way?

Kiss
01-26-2008, 07:43 PM
A girl with the screen name REVENGE on miniclip her stuff is amazing.

KittyCat72
01-26-2008, 08:12 PM
Those peoms are pretty nice. I have to write a poem last year for my portfolio... didn't turn out nice.

rukisuto
01-26-2008, 09:52 PM
Those are nice :]
I'm bad at writing poems.
Definitely keep writing 'em.

Kiss
01-27-2008, 05:46 AM
Thank you
thank you people for all this good praise
maybe it will help me skip the writers block phase
a scream of delight
in the night
happiness is coming
at top speed it is running
thank you goodnight
praise is a wonderful sight

conman1000
01-27-2008, 06:37 AM
Very good. You can rap this, I just tried.

Kiss
01-27-2008, 06:39 AM
I know you can but peoplez dis rap.