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Kiss
02-10-2008, 05:17 PM
The Luck
You barely reached the islands shore
Before you knew it you were standing on gold floor
A maiden waiting on you
Doing anything you ask her to
Eating a feast
In the far east
Tonight you have duck
What luck

Fake Love
Fall upon young
Hold your tongue
young love
almost like a dove
It comes fast
before you know it, its in the past.

Travel
Barrels roll
I paid the toll
Upon horse
On a cruel course
Also on feet
You go through wind snow rain and sleet
Food is gone
Finally travel is done

Strickin
02-10-2008, 05:19 PM
Wow nice poems keep it up!

Ubernerd
02-10-2008, 07:09 PM
Good, especially the young love one ^^

younging94
02-10-2008, 10:39 PM
i loved fake love, keep writing =D
Hope they get into a book

rukisuto
02-10-2008, 10:40 PM
You're a good writer :]
Keep it up!