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Kiss
02-19-2008, 02:50 PM
A story by yours truly freebee.

Chapter one: Lynn lived in a fancy town in California hugging the pacific ocean. The town was always filled with sunlight long into the night, the population was little and far away from cities. Lynn's family homeschooled her and because she had no freinds after learning hours she would spend time in her attic.
One evening she crept up the creaking stairs to the attic. a strange erie glow was coming from under the door. She crept in, and the glow was coming from a chest in the back of the attic near a round window. when she got to it, the usual mice surrounding the box where gone. She brushed away her long blonde hair and opened the trunk as she did the glow stopped disapointed she walked back down stairs not knowing the deed she had just done. She had just received the power of eternity.

Chapter two:
The next morning her parents and elder sister were out and she was sitting at the table eating shredded wheat. Faint sunlight glittered through the window onto the table, it was surprisingly warm that day. Then a human like creature about a foot long a faint shade of blue hopped onto the table from nowhere as Lynn screamed from fear, the room became dark and spinning.
When the darkness and the spinning finally stopped she found herself in a room draped in red and gold. Then she heard a woman say, "Lynn" Then she saw a woman in magnificent robes her face plastered with makeup. She then said, " You have found the power of eternity, I need your help. 20 years ago the duke named Loi Dame captured are king he performed a spell causing the King to be trapped in two identical pearls." She showed Lynn a pearl of which a man inside was kneeling. " The only way to free our king is to get the second pearl from the duke and make the touch. I will now show you Loi. And with a flick of her hand a small round warp showed a man with long dark scraggly hair and a pinched face behind him she saw a identical pearl, to the one the queen had showed her, on a pillow.

Chapter 3:
After the queens speech to her Lynn was led out of that room into another room much smaller but still draped with bloodred and gold cloth. In one corner was a bed with gold coverings and a red matress. another corner had a rug chair and fireplace. the other one had a bookshelf and lamp, the last had a desk. Upon the desk was a bird a magnificent bird. When the man left, she quickly wrote a letter to her parents.
" Dear mother and father,
I am sorry I beleive I may never see you again. I won't say why you won't beleive this page, but I am on a quest i don't know where i am. I hope you don't forget me,
Lynn"
She quickly tied together the leather together and strapped it to the birds claw. She then spoke
" Try to find my parents in California. Please if you do give them this"
Without another word the magnificent bird flew off.

Jaykub
02-19-2008, 04:07 PM
VERY GOOD!

keep up the good work I like it

Kiss
02-20-2008, 09:50 AM
Okay writing chapter 3.