Poetry- I will not tell.

[Kiss]

I will not tell
Strap me to a bed
Hold a price above my head
Smack me with a stick
Hit my head with a brick
I will not tell
You can make my family unwell
No secret will you hear
Even if you dunk me in beer
Stab my eye
Make my love die
No secret will be foretold
Make my mothers hand cold
Everything i will bear
At you i will continue to stare
Make the soldiers come for me
Threaten to strip me to a raft at sea
I will not tell
Even if I fell
If I fall at your mercy be
No secret will you see
To the man
Of which I can get my food can
I protect his word
I telling you is absurd
You will not get this secret note
Of which the king has wrote

Story behind the poem
Last night i dreamed i was in a country long ago in war i had to bring a message to a war general for the king. I had a person chasing me from the other country trying to get me to him the word, and that person in this poem is you.

I hope you enjoyed this and are looking forward for those to come.

[LiNuX]

wow sounds violent and its good :D i like rhymes lol

thats really good that you turn your dreams into written poems, lots of poets do that or claim to :-P

keep up the writing

[Kiss]

Thanks i think it took place in world war 2 looked like it in the dream.

[Ubernerd]

Wow, great stuff Freebee, I enjoyed it :D

[Jaykub]

WOW thats really good. Keep up the good work. You should get LiNuX to open you up a sub forum for ya.

[Kiss]

Thanksies people.