A picture on the wall

[Kiss]

A picture on the wall

I stood looking at it
Not knowing what to make of it
It was hideous but lovely
It was an odd picture of a man named Dudley
I asked who is he
Someone answered, nobody knows but me
I looked around I was the only one I could see
I heard no breathing saw no shadow
I asked where are you? Nobody'd show
A prickle down spine
I ran off just in time

[Samus-Fan]

I like this poem, though I don't really understand it.

Good Job though, the rhymes were really good!

[diablo]

cool that sounds cool, my english teacher would have loved you lol, she's a poem freak

[LiNuX]

i like this but just a suggestion, in the next to last line, i think it'll sound better if you put "my spine" instead of just "spine" lol - but im not poet :) just sounds more rhymie lol

good work there :)

[Kiss]

Oops. Ohwell. Not gonna ruin my reputation atleast.

[rukisuto]

I like this poem, though I don't really understand it.

Good Job though, the rhymes were really good!

A ghost possibly? :]
Very nice poem, you always come up with some good rhymes.