It Wasn't Madness...

[Kiss]

It Wasn't Madness...
Her heart seemed in a rage
Her emotions locked in a cage
The raging war, over her empty heart
Everyone she loved, taking part.

Tearing her apart...
Breaking her heart
So cruel
As heartless as a duel.

The madness creeping in her soul,
She was not insane, or thoughts gone dull.
The fighting and loss of love
All her guidance gone above.

Tearing her apart...
Breaking her heart
So cruel
As heartless as a duel.

She couldn't hold life,
wished to be torn apart by a knife.
She couldn't die
But WHY?

Tearing her apart...
Breaking her heart
So cruel
As heartless as a duel.

I hope I still got my touch... =(

[Cream Suede]

very good my friend
I write lyrics for my band and this is some good stuff.

[KittyCat72]

Good, just like all your others. Have you ever written one that didn't rhyme? Just wondering...