So, yeah. I rap. (:

[Flow]

I have a few videos on Youtube, here's one of my most recent.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ml7HoSdNK2I
I know I'm not great, still practicing everyday. (:
It'd be awesome if you guys liked my page on facebook
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Just trying to get me out there.
Tell me what you guys think?
EDIT: That's not my most recent, my most recent is called "Kill Those Dogs"

[Mexer]

I feel like you need to be more aggressive with the rappin' . Other than that, I like it!

[Kink3bird]

You sound like your in front of the class trying to read your homework as fast as you can so you can just sit back down.

Your rhymes are good but you need to get a style down. Like really put some feeling into the music, maybe try a slower beat or something that works for you better until you can speed rap with more pronouncement.
That was the biggest problem was the monotone speed rapping. You gotta give it more oomf and I don't know much about rap but Eminem's part in the Biggie Smalls song "Dead Wrong" I think would help you out.

You shouldn't just be keeping up with the beat like that you should be showing control like the beat is trying to follow you.

Hope it helps man, may the swag be with you!

[Flow]

Thanks guys, I have better ones up now. (Go check out my rap "Kill Those Dogs" I have much more emphasis in my words, My earlier recordings, I was just nervous.
Thanks!

[Trunks]

Huge improvement from your first one, It's actually pretty good.