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    Sorry, the renders a bit bad. I rendered it myself and I couldn't see the white bits on photoshop :F

    BUMP - Want some feedback
    Last edited by LiNuX; 12-31-2011 at 06:00 PM. Reason: Don't bump the thread! It hasn't even been an hour since you posted

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    First and foremost, you cannot bump your own threads. Especially 40 minutes apart. That's against the rules and you'll get a slap on the wrist -- so don't do it.
    The reason no one wanted to review it -- or give you criticism, is because they're all nice. And this is a really bad piece of 'art'.

    Secondly, I'm a dick. And an artist. And a critic. I didn't get the title Forum Jackass for nothing and you're about to discover why. D:


    1. When using Photoshop, change the background color layers so that you can pick up on all of that white crap in your image. It looks horrible. I count 5 pieces where you could have easily cleaned it up.

    2. Never. Never. NEVER. Use red and blue together. Ever again. You're not KU -- it doesn't work for you.
    2a. Your stroke is too wide, regardless of the color you used.
    2b. The outer glow is still the default yellow color, which means you just clicked the checkbox and moved on, thinking that you created a masterpiece.

    Negative, broski.

    3. You didn't even render the damn image to the size of the text. You cut off a piece of your own art. RE-donk-U-Los. Seriously, dude.

    Shame on you.



    Tips

    While I pretty much trashed you, it was all in good faith that you wont make simple mistakes again. This entire piece would have taken me 5 minutes to make. And 3 minutes spent finding a damn biscuit on the internet.

    Select everything around the biscuit.
    -- Go to Select > Modify > Expand (you want to grow your selection)
    | play with this setting, but I'd guess by the looks, 3 px.
    NOW.
    -- Go to Select > Modify > Feather (you want to fade your biscuit)
    | I'd say 2 px ... then hit BACKSPACE.

    Make sure the biscuit is on it's own layer also. This will fade the biscuits edges.

    Another tip

    When you're in the Text Options Pallet (double-clicking on the text layer)
    | CLICK the line that says Outer Glow, and then click the color box. Play with the settings, but never leave it the default piss-yellow. That's lame.

    Make it a soft brow, like the actual biscuit is.

    Then click STROKE, and drop it to 1 or 2. The default is 3 and that's totally what it looks like -- lol.

    Lastly, change the font size smaller -- so that you're not cutting it to pieces. That's maddening.

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    Thanks for the advice, reading it all atm!

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    And Ex is back! Lol :P
    If you send me FR, let me know who you are!


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    Lolol. Yeah, you know it. xD

    I DID give him tips! I'm learning. XD

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