Psychotray's new rap album coming out soon!

[Psychotray]

Hello there young lads, as you probably know or probably don't know, I am an Australian rapper and I would appreciate it if you could listen to the little promo snippet song I dropped today, constructive criticism please. Check out all these links and interact with them...

Facebook Fan Page -
Psychotray | Facebook

NEW SONG! -
Psychotray - ''Prepare For The Mixtape'' (Promo) by Inject Records on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Please support REAL rap, like my facebook page, add me on soundcloud, and comment constructively telling me what you think about my new track....

[Mizel]

Wow, I was totally unaware that you rap. :P Im not into it, but Ill be sure to check it our and spread the word!

[Synge]

Not something I can really get into either, rap is really hard for me to like :P But I'll listen to your tracks as you post them, maybe you'll surprise me.

Good luck!

[GamingWeston]

Wow. I didn't know that you rap and I'm not much of an expert but maybe you could make the vocals and the instrumental background more coherent. I don't exactly know how to say this and I might be wrong but I think you have to start with a catchy drums & instrumental background and in the vocals you can make use of them, make the two live together. With your track, the vocals could be separated and placed on top of a different instrumental background, because it's not really coherent. But in case of good rap songs that I know, they only live and sound good together.
And you could add some more melodic lines, but it's just my taste.

[Psychotray]

Wow. I didn't know that you rap and I'm not much of an expert but maybe you could make the vocals and the instrumental background more coherent. I don't exactly know how to say this and I might be wrong but I think you have to start with a catchy drums & instrumental background and in the vocals you can make use of them, make the two live together. With your track, the vocals could be separated and placed on top of a different instrumental background, because it's not really coherent. But in case of good rap songs that I know, they only live and sound good together.
And you could add some more melodic lines, but it's just my taste.

Thanks for the advice, bare in mind I'm using Audacity, so I'm quite limited as to what I can do with the vocal side of my tracks, if you could recommend any programs that'd be better for recording then I'm all eyes and ears. The track wasn't really a full track, it was just a promotional/shout out sort of thing. I'm going to re-record the whole track this year, and put it in my mixtape.

[egg-whites333]

i cant wait for your track i want to see what you can do with this and btw i knew you were a rapper. :P

[Psychotray]

How'd you know that?