Signature C&C Thread

[LemonRising]

@ psychotray
RE: Bioshock.jpg
I think the border takes away from the rest of the signature too much. Its very bright and is the first thing I noticed when I looked at the sig. I think maybe darkening bigdaddy might help him 'creep' into the background more too.


@bitterkingskyler
RE: SasukeUchiha.jpg
The 'bitterkingskyler' text seems to be a bit harsh/choppy. I think a better font would suit it better. The render on the left is good but I'm wondering if he should be more center/forward. I know the right render is his brother, and it seems like you were trying to make him a 'commanding presence', yeh? So I don't think the brother's hand should overlap sasuke.

RE: GaaraoftheSand.jpg
Pretty much all I have to say on this one is that the text 'of' and 'the' are getting washed out a bit, and it'd be a good idea to add some colour behind them to make them pop some more.


@egw333
RE: CallofDuty.jpg
The text kind of blends into the background with their similar colours and the lack of texture. Try using different lighting techniques and a different or brighter colour than the one you're using.
The background seems very flat and could use some contrast and texture. Going from a very high contrast render to a flat colour background seems lacking. Free Textures from TextureKing this site has some great textures for free that you can play with : D

RE: Infamous.jpg
The render seems a little squished, fixing that would help a lot.
The text should maybe be a different colour than the lightning in the background, or vice versa. The 'o' looks a little lost there, and you can always paint over it a little bit to thicken it up to match the rest of the letters.
I would say lose the guy in the background altogether, or bring him in front of the lightning and make him more apart of the signature.


@Slay
RE: Slay.jpg
I think some of the elements in the background have choppy edges, and one of the black bolts seems to be missing a spot where it should be coloured in. The long white 'strings' should have all black/gray outline removed.
The text seems to be lacking as well, maybe some texture needs to be added to it? Can't really put my finger on it haha.

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I usually try and add "I LIKE THIS AND THIS" to each critique but there's so many XD
I do like em all though, and keep up the fantastic work guys! Hope I helped D: