Signature C&C Thread

[Slay]

@Slay
RE: Slay.jpg
I think some of the elements in the background have choppy edges, and one of the black bolts seems to be missing a spot where it should be coloured in. The long white 'strings' should have all black/gray outline removed.
The text seems to be lacking as well, maybe some texture needs to be added to it? Can't really put my finger on it haha.

I was aiming for that. I rendered it all myself, sorry for the choppiness.
I was going to make the Background lined paper, I couldn't find a good piece, so I went with brown.